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Mrs. Wong

Monday, January 18, 2010

Rapunzel

This story of Rapunzel was set in the Limited Third Person point of view. I think that was the best choice for this story since there were many scenes with different characters.

I was surprised by how much dialogue they put in the story instead of just talking about what the characters had said. Most of the dialogue was from the scenes where the prince stood at the bottom of the castle and called out, "Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair." but they did have some of the other characters speak. There was quite a bit of dialoge but I liked that better because it helped to picture the story better.

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